Respond to 2 of the three questions below.
1- Up until now, Equality has been sneaking in and out of his hidden place to work on his invention. One night he is caught sneaking back in to his “home.” What is his punishment?
2- How did Equality become free from the Palace of Corrective Detention?
3- The old locks and lack of guards in the Palace of Corrective Detention indicate that prisoners have never tried to escape. According to the text, why not?
1- Up until now, Equality has been sneaking in and out of his hidden place to work on his invention. One night he is caught sneaking back in to his “home.” What is his punishment?
2- How did Equality become free from the Palace of Corrective Detention?
3- The old locks and lack of guards in the Palace of Corrective Detention indicate that prisoners have never tried to escape. According to the text, why not?
1.being lashed with lips
ReplyDelete2.he passed out
3.nobody has ever defied the counsil
Still good response, but needs more info on all three.
DeleteNeeds more information and details.
DeleteYou need more details on all of them.
DeleteBradley , Thou not needest judge others work but thou shalt support thou classmate!!!!!!!!
DeleteThe same goes for Fry and Britney you guys need to be more supportive to you classmates ,adults, and elders
Delete1: Equality`s punishment is to be sent to the hall of detention, while he was there he was tied to iron post and lashed. Equality was also hit in the face a few times. Since he didn`t speak he was throne in a cell.
ReplyDelete2: Equality remembered that there was no guards and the locks were old. The reason was that nobody ever tried to defey the councils orders. Equality just ran at the door, the door broke open. He then escaped and went to his tunnel.
this is a really good response.
Delete2. While Equality is in the place of corrective detention ther are no gaurds at their door. The locks are also very old so they are easy to break. They then steal a candle and go through the dark tunnels and streets to their secret room.
ReplyDelete3. The old locks and lack of gaurds in the prison shows that nobody has ever tried to escape because nobody knows defience. Anybody who was locked away would have no idea what escape was. Also some of the people would be afraid to defy the concil in fear of what would happen to them if they tried.
This is good!
Deleteyou are really good at this stuff Colby, that was a really good explanation.
Delete2. The locks are old and guards are hardly ever on watch.
ReplyDelete3. They do not want to go against the Council. They are afraid of what they might do to them.
1. He is sent to a jail like place called "the palace of corrective detention'' and is whipped and then left until he sais were he was.
ReplyDelete2. He just busted down the old rusty door, and the only reason he didn't have trouble was because he was the first to try it.
1) Equality punishment was that he got send to the Palace of Corrective Detention. Where he got wiped for not tell the guards where he was that night.
ReplyDelete2) Equality freed him self from the Palace of Corrective Detention by kicking the door down.
I agree with all your points that you made.
Delete1. The punishments was to get beaten until he told where he was. He didn't tell so he went to jail.
ReplyDelete2. The locks were old in the jail because nobody tried to break out. But he did he just kicked it and it broke and he was free.
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ReplyDelete#1: he got grounded and he didn't gt to leave the house for like a month or so and he got lashed with lips
ReplyDelete#2: he passed out and he couldn't wake up for a while cause he was unconsuaus where he got bashed in the lips.
#3: the old lack of guards and lacks shows that no one has ever tried to escape the prison and they didn't have enough guts to even try to escape the prison cause they would be scared of what would happen If they ven thought of sneaking out of the prison.
Good work
DeleteVery good work Corey.
DeleteHe got whipped in the Palace of Corrective Detention.
ReplyDeleteThe door and lock was old so he lunged at the door and it collapsed.
needs more details and better grammar other than that your good to go kiddo
Delete1. his punishment for sneaking off in to his hole was being hit with a whip.
ReplyDelete2.he was able to escape from the corrective detention palace ,because the hinges were weak and there were no guards watching, because they thought that know one would try to escape.
1.The consequence for his actions are terrible. Being lashed multiple times across the back is very painful. I couldn't imagine what he felt like while that was happening.
ReplyDelete2. Not a soul was there guarding the doors. He kicked it down and was set free. The reason no one had ever escaped is because nobody ever tried, because they were to afraid.
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ReplyDelete1. He is taken to the Palace of Corrective Detention where they tore off his clothes, tied him to an iron post, and beat him. Then he was put in a cell.
ReplyDelete3. Prisoners never tried to escape from the Palace of Corrective Detention because they were afraid of what would happen to them.
hmmm needs a few improvements on the foundation and the structure and some grammar other than that great job kiddo
Delete2) Equality got out of the Palace of Corrective Detention because the locks on the cells were very old and weak. They also got out of there because their is no guards because no one has rebelled them.
ReplyDelete3) They never tried to rebel against them before because they had a fear on what might happen to them. Like they would be "the damned". They also could be sent to the World Council to be sentence to the worst.
Great job
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